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I need you guys to vote.

I've fully conceptualized the next chapter I want to include as the intermediary between the first day and the day at the beach. Its fun shenanigans involving a perverted rodent, ending in an ominous revelation. However, the more I think about it, this revelation ties in to the overall plot, and that just gets me back to thinking about my original issue with the pacing. Was there ever a problem? I've been running this over in my head for months and I'm still not sure.

I need you guys to vote again on if you want me to re-post those chapters and try to get my momentum back, or try to work this new chapter in now instead of later.

Also, I'd like you guys to vote on if you want there to be a maid or not. I'm leaning more towards no, instead just have her be a friend of the family who pops by every now and then, but whose presence is much more minimal. 

Please speak up. The more people who vote, the more comfortable I'll feel with the decision.

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lordmep
He who thinks too much
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stephdumas Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2014
One guy did a very good rebuttal going after a viral propraganda in the Michael Brown case iotwreport.com/?p=264160
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ShadowofWOPR Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2014
Thanks for the correction, I have since fixed the title.
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Jacmirie Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
men's rights activism is a joke and so are you
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lordmep Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
That is the greatest argument I've ever heard. You've really touched me and I now see the light. From this day forth, I, the great and powerful lordmep will dedicate my life to worshiping at the altar of feminism. Thank you for sharing such wisdom with me.
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Jacmirie Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
lol
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lordmep Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Since I am left to assume that you are a feminist and therefore take issue with objectification of women, I offer you this www.youtube.com/watch?v=90rHFr…

Dongle be with you www.youtube.com/watch?v=KfDoIy…
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CrimsonFALKE Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hey would this really be something for your groupcrimsonfalke.deviantart.com/ar… or not I won't mind if its not
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lordmep Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I'm sorry, but no. You say "misogynist" once and that whole thing seemed inconsequential to the rest of the story.
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nightchildmoonchild Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Meant to say "on fire," not just "fire."
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nightchildmoonchild Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
lordmep, have you see JohntheOther's videos lately? The man is fire, I'll give him that, but all the same, I'm a little concerned.
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